Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Sentence basics

Main clauses:
She gets excited.
Ada doesn't want to go to bed.
I know Ada very well.
I have lived with Ada and Lizbeth.

Subordinate clauses:
because my niece Ada loves bunnies
when she sees a bunny
unless she has Hop-Hop
because I live in a house with her and my sister Lizbeth
since Ada was six months old
which was two and a half years ago

Phrases:
in the backyard
at night
her toy bunny
to hold in her arms

Sentences:
---Because my niece Ada loves bunnies, she gets excited when she sees a bunny in the backyard.
---Ada doesn't want to go to bed at night unless she has Hop-Hop, her toy bunny, to hold in her arms.
---I know Ada very well because I live in the same house as her and my sister Lizbeth.
---I have lived with Ada and Lizbeth since Ada was six months old, which was two and a half years ago.

Wednesday, January 11, 2012

This is my first blog post for English 101. I'm excited to be in this class because it is my first step toward getting a bachelor's degree in Social Work. I have been a full-time college student before, but I did not do well academically. The main problem was that I had difficulty writing papers. I think perfectionism was the root of the problem. I would constantly edit my compositions in my head so much that I stopped being able to write. Nothing was perfect enough to write down. I would feel more and more anxious the more I tried to write a paper, and eventually I would just give up.

Recently I feel a new sense of motivation to get a college degree. It is frustrating to try to find employment without a degree. It's difficult to find a job that feels satisfying, and actually it's just difficult to find a job at all. Not having a college degree also hurts my self-confidence, and I find self-confidence is very important when I'm job-searching.

I think this blog will be very helpful for getting past my anxiety about writing papers. I love writing letters, emails, and writing in my journal. I even love filling out forms. I am a natural writer in many ways. But the anxiety I feel when writing in a scholastic environment has stopped me from reaching my goals.

My biggest challenge with this blog is not to edit my writing. I think that is extremely important, but it is also extremely difficult for me! It has been a challenge to write this much. I have to constantly work to silence my inner critic so I can keep getting words out. Then I need to keep myself from going back and editing what I've written. I think that is incredibly important because until I can be comfortable with writing imperfectly, I will continue having extreme difficulty writing at all.